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  • s4sree
    • Oct 2006
    • 4854

    A Thought!!

    When the world was made

    By the God so great

    Their started the life

    with all creatures so trife

    before one creation of the Lord

    That was the first being, Adam

    BUt the loneliness he felt in his heart

    made even God think about him twice

    And he gave Adam, a reason to live,

    A reason to love, A reason to believe in his power

    In form of his Lady Love Eve

    Dont know, whether it is imitation or

    A character borne by succesive generations

    From the first man of the world

    But I too feel the same loneliness

    As was borne by him, in his early days

    Even in this world, so crowded

    My heart unknowingly searches for someone

    whom I have never seen or heard from

    But only felt deep inside in my heart

    My eyes go on a roll

    in the sight of someone really special

    My mind begins an inherent quest

    which even I dont know for sure

    But as I see you more and more

    And know you along increasingly

    MY quest dwindles into its results

    Giving me, the Eve of my life , thats you, dear

    See, these are my feelings,

    which are responsible for that extra heartbeat

    which my heart beats these days

    these are the feelings which i never can hide

    From the one whom I believe in so much

    And also I should say

    I dont say you are my only reason to live like Adam

    Even i dont take you as associated with me

    Because you are a being of your own soul

    A individual, a sensible person of its own class

    But surely, love has no reasons to tell

    No criteria to fulfill

    No bloody thoughts to mention

    It is as simple as it is for me

    And I hope the same for you on my behalf
    ******************************
    If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
    keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.

    **************************************
  • christeena_4_u
    Weindianvip
    • Nov 2006
    • 1280

    #2
    ayyoddaa..soo cuttee!! adipoli wordings aannu tto!! ninte own kala aanno??? nywayz..thanx a lot sree..

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    • s4sree
      • Oct 2006
      • 4854

      #3
      u are welcome
      ******************************
      If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
      keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.

      **************************************

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      • Jessfrance
        • Sep 2006
        • 4440

        #4
        Yes thats the same for me aswell....nee enghane worry cheyaathiri mone...haha :laugh:



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        • sonumary
          • Sep 2006
          • 2085

          #5
          kolaam sree.. a beautiful post....

          ~*~The height of pain in life is to sit near the person
          u love d most .....
          knowing that the person can never b urs ...!!!!!~*~

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