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  • s4sree
    • Oct 2006
    • 4854
    #1

    I Wish You Knew........

    I wish you knew
    how I felt about you
    wish you could read my thoughts
    I think about you
    all day long

    when I see you
    my heart melts
    as crazy as it seems
    I think I could fall
    for you outside of my dreams
    I barley even know you
    but somehow it feels just too right
    to possibly be true
    the late nights I spend with you
    up studying and talking
    is what I wish for as soon as I wake-up
    I want you as my love

    wish you knew
    how I felt about you
    your presence makes me weak
    I can hardly even speak
    when your near me
    just a glimpse of your smile
    and one look in your eyes
    turns me on

    I know you still have feelings for her
    but I want to erase them
    and make you realize
    all women are not the same inside
    I care for you
    I don't know what she was thinking
    the night she left you
    but listen to me
    the way I feel about you
    is nothing she can complete too
    darling I wish you knew

    I'm in my room
    writing about you
    the rain is pouring
    and I love it
    that means I'm going to have a sweet dream about you

    when I awake
    and I see you waiting for me
    for us too go eat
    and then off too class we go
    you think I just want to be your best friend
    but the truth is
    I want it too be more
    as I sit by you
    I wonder do my feelings show
    but you'll never know
    but how I...
    wish you knew!!!


    I hope you guys will like this.............................................. ...

    please spend some time for posting your replies after reading this
    Last edited by s4sree; 23 April 2007, 19:33.
    ******************************
    If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
    keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
    **************************************
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  • sonish
    Weindianvip
    • Oct 2006
    • 1343
    #2
    Superb poem i liked it thanks for sharing.

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    • s4sree
      • Oct 2006
      • 4854
      #3
      Originally posted by sonish View Post
      Superb poem i liked it thanks for sharing.

      you are welcome mate....and thanks for replying....
      ******************************
      If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
      keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
      **************************************

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      • sparrow
        • Dec 2006
        • 3974
        #4
        thats a very nice n cute poem...
        Never regret a day in your life. Good days give you happiness; bad days give you experiences; both are essential to life-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

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        • s4sree
          • Oct 2006
          • 4854
          #5
          hehehee..thank you chechi.........it had to be good , afterall it tok me some time...
          ******************************
          If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
          keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
          **************************************

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          • meerahul
            • Oct 2006
            • 158
            #6
            first class!!...2 b honest....thnk u very much...
            " Love is born with the pleasure of looking at each other, it is fed with the necessity of seeing each other, it is concluded with the impossibility of separation..... "

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            • s4sree
              • Oct 2006
              • 4854
              #7
              thanks for the compliment ......and thanks for replying...
              ******************************
              If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
              keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
              **************************************

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              • Jessfrance
                • Sep 2006
                • 4440
                #8
                thats soooo touchign sreee bhai!!!! thankz 4 sharing!



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                • s4sree
                  • Oct 2006
                  • 4854
                  #9
                  Originally posted by Jessfrance View Post
                  thats soooo touchign sreee bhai!!!! thankz 4 sharing!

                  you are welcome jess behan....!!!
                  thanks for replying...
                  ******************************
                  If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
                  keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
                  **************************************

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                  • a.j.
                    • Dec 2006
                    • 26
                    #10
                    thats sooooo sweet!!!!!!!
                    thanx 4 sharin!
                    To the world you may be just one person...but to one person, you may mean the world:weindian1: :firework: :_) :_) .

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                    • s4sree
                      • Oct 2006
                      • 4854
                      #11
                      Originally posted by a.j. View Post
                      thats sooooo sweet!!!!!!!
                      thanx 4 sharin!
                      you are welcome mate......and thanks for replying...
                      ******************************
                      If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
                      keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
                      **************************************

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                      • anusebasti
                        • Jul 2007
                        • 41
                        #12
                        nice poem. thanks 4 sharing

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                        • MERIJAAN
                          • Oct 2007
                          • 6
                          #13
                          great work kepp it up :l:l

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                          • s4sree
                            • Oct 2006
                            • 4854
                            #14
                            thanks for you replies.......
                            ******************************
                            If there ever comes a day When we can't be together
                            keep me in your heart, I'll stay there forever.
                            **************************************

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                            • teena
                              • Nov 2006
                              • 5716
                              #15
                              chweet poem ...danx for posting ...orupadu improvement undallo....hehe !!!

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